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posted by [personal profile] katherine_b at 08:55am on 05/05/2010 under , ,
Title: Second Chances – Wing And A Prayer
Author: [livejournal.com profile] katherine_b
Rating: G
Summary: The Doctor is desperate for Donna to survive. He’ll even cross his own timeline if he has to.
Word Count: approx 400 words
Characters: Ten, Donna and Wilf
A/N: Written for [livejournal.com profile] louiecat68 who says “I was reading "Second Chances " again. You always have me wondering what the Doctor is saying when he is fixing Donna.”

The door of the infirmary slides closed behind Wilf and the Doctor is grateful that the other man didn’t argue. He doesn’t have time for that because he can feel Donna weakening. He casts a desperate glance at her as he pulls the flask towards him containing those precious nanogenes, thanking whatever deity might be listening that his ninth incarnation hadn’t heard the TARDIS or spotted his behaviour in those vital seconds.

As he removes the lid, a cloud of gold surrounds him. He can feel the nanogenes reading him, measuring him, trying to determine what injury they are here to repair. He summons them with his hands, just as he did when he was a different man, on that glorious day when everybody lived.

He wants to repeat that miracle now so badly that he aches with it.

“Come on,” he breathes as he directs the nanogenes to Donna, hoping desperately that there’s enough time to make this work. “Please understand. Change her. Make her like me so that she can survive my mind in hers. Let her live too!”

Out of the corner of his eye, he sees as the machine recording Donna’s heart begins to slow. The faint banging from outside the room suggests that Wilf has seen it too, but he doesn’t have time to spare on him now.

He places a hand on Donna’s arm as the nanogenes disappear, feeling as things begin to change, letting out the breath he’s been holding, sensing as the changes they have begun sweep through her body, changing her, doing what he had hoped would happen.

The muscles of her chest contract and then pulse into life even as they form into her second heart. Her lungs cease motion for a full minute as Donna’s new respiratory bypass develops. Her skin temperature begins to cool beneath his hand.

He rocks back on his heels, confident again, truly happy, as a grin works its way across his face. The machine recording Donna’s heart shows the beating of her two hearts, gloriously strong. Alive.

At that instant, he remembers the frantic grandfather waiting in the hall and picks up the sonic screwdriver, pointing it over his shoulder, hearing as the door slides open.

“You can come in,” the Doctor tells him, barely able to keep the ecstasy out of his voice. “It’s over.”
Mood:: 'restless' restless
There are 16 comments on this entry. (Reply.)
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posted by [personal profile] juliet316 at 11:05pm on 04/05/2010
Very lovely. Poor Ten and Wilf, you can feel their anxiety, both for same and similar reasons.
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 11:41pm on 04/05/2010
Thank you. Yes, it's a very stressful moment.
 
posted by [identity profile] kwiknkleen.livejournal.com at 11:14pm on 04/05/2010
Must go back and read Second Chances. I loved it and this.
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 11:42pm on 04/05/2010
Thank you! Yes, it's been a while, so I wouldn't be surprised if people had forgotten it.
 
posted by [identity profile] lilbreck.livejournal.com at 11:16pm on 04/05/2010
Oh, this is lovely! Now I need to go read Second Chances!
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 11:43pm on 04/05/2010
So glad you enjoyed it, and I hope you like the original fic as well!
 
posted by [identity profile] louiecat68.livejournal.com at 11:42pm on 04/05/2010
Thank you so much! This was a great little piece of sweetness after a very long rather nasty day. Big hugs to you and your bunnies
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 11:44pm on 04/05/2010
I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Sorry you've had such a bad day. *hugs*
sykira: (Brilliant!)
posted by [personal profile] sykira at 03:00am on 05/05/2010
Oh this was fabulous, I love revisiting your previous stories this way, it pulls me right back in. Go nanogenes go!
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 05:50am on 05/05/2010
So glad you enjoyed it! And the nanogenes are very useful, aren't they?
 
posted by [identity profile] time-converges.livejournal.com at 03:38am on 05/05/2010
Oh, so lovely, especially "Let her live too." I love how you captured his desperate hope here, his last ditch effort, and then his joy when it works. I'm also glad for the excuse to go re-read the original. :) Gorgeous.
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 05:51am on 05/05/2010
Yes, a bit of desperation from our Time Lord there, so very hopeful, and just ecstatic at the end.

Hope you had a good night's sleep! *hugs*
 
posted by [identity profile] shining-moment.livejournal.com at 06:37pm on 05/05/2010
Oh, I love so much how relieved and happy the Doctor is at the end of this :)
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 10:12pm on 05/05/2010
Thank you! Yes, he certainly is!
 
posted by [identity profile] ebony-steinbach.livejournal.com at 07:14pm on 05/05/2010
I never commented then so I'll do it now: Second Chances is one of my favourite fix-its because it was the first time anyone had thought to use nanogenes and I thought it was incredibly clever and perfect. If Donna ever gets fixed in canon, this is how I want it to be because it'd balance everything out nicely. Anyway, I love that we get the Doctor's POV in this chapter and it's a nice call-back to 'Everybody lives' (plus it gave me a chance to comment on the original). I have to say, though, poor choice of words on the Doctor's part when he spoke to Wilf ; )
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 10:27pm on 05/05/2010
Thank you so much! It seemed quite logical to me that nanogenes could be used for that purpose, but I'm surprised other people never seemed to think of it. (Nor that I ever used it again, for that matter.)

I do rather love it when Ten's behaviour calls back to or parallels Nine's, and that is just a wonderfully joyous moment for Nine! That said, you are so right about it being a poor choice of words! I never noticed before now, but it really, really is...

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