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posted by [personal profile] katherine_b at 04:25pm on 02/05/2010 under , ,
Title: When Wrong is Right
Author: [livejournal.com profile] katherine_b
Rating: G
Summary: This time, is the Doctor just plain wrong?
Word Count: approx 1,100 words
Characters: Ten and Donna
A/N: As a result of bidding on me at the Support Stacie auction, [livejournal.com profile] sonicgirl2005 was invited to give me a prompt for a fic. She asked for “Sometimes it's good to be wrong.”

“Have you got it, Doctor?”

The Doctor turns to face her, his expression tense. “No. You?”

Donna is forced to shake her head. “No idea. No one would tell me anything.”

“We’re too foreign.” He looks around in frustration. “This is so big, so secret, that not even psychic paper is getting them to tell us anything. They expect to see someone trying to sneak their way in, so they do.”

“Doctor, are you sure they’re planning a coup?” Donna demands, finally catching her breath after what seems like hours of running. “I mean – it couldn’t be something else? I don’t know, less sinister?”

He gives a hollow laugh. “Not exactly likely, is it?” he demands sartorially. “I mean, we know they’ve got boxes of explosives, timed to be set off around the city. And from our conversation with the governor, he has no idea that anything could be planned. Maybe,” he adds bitterly, “it’s nine hundred years of experience talking, but that doesn’t usually bode well.”

Donna sighs. “I suppose not,” she’s forced to agree. “It’s just – we’ve been in this situation a few times now.” She glances at the Doctor for confirmation, but he’s too busy staring at the walled city in front of them in a state of obvious gloom to respond. “And,” she goes on with an effort to sound more cheerful, “it doesn’t feel tense enough in there for what seems like it’s about to happen.”

“I don’t know how you can be so certain,” the Doctor snaps, “considering we can’t get hold of the password that would let us into the city to find out for sure!”

Silenced by the tone of his voice, Donna looks around as the sun slips beneath the horizon and the world around them darkens. She can’t help shivering slightly at the cool breeze that picks up and, knowing that the Doctor won’t want to leave until he can be certain of the result of the political event they have been warned will happen here today, she moves away to gather together some wood.

The Doctor is still standing with his back to her, staring at the locked gate some distance away, as if he could somehow wish himself inside. Donna sighs and begins rubbing two sticks together, hoping that she can start a fire, which will at least give them – her, actually, since the Doctor doesn’t ever seem to feel the cold! – some warmth while they wait.

Five minutes later, all she’s managed is to get hot and bothered when a hand comes to rest on her shoulder and then she sees the blue flash of the sonic. The wood ignites and she sinks back on her haunches to cast a glance of aggravation at the Doctor, who at least has the grace to look ashamed as he removes his coat and places it on the ground for them to sit on.

“Sorry,” he murmurs as he sits down and pats the ground for her to take a seat beside him.

“Are you sure,” Donna asks as she wriggles into a more comfortable position, “that we’re meant to be changing things here anyway? It’s not a fixed point in time or something?”

He shrugs a little. “Some points of it are,” he admits, “but we could have stopped the actual events if we’d been inside the city. We can’t do anything from out here though,” he adds gloomily.

She leans back so that her shoulder brushes his. “I’m sorry,” she says, and he shakes his head.

“Not your fault,” he replies at once.

“Not yours either,” Donna suggests, wondering if she’ll convince him. “Maybe this just wasn’t meant to be.”

“Five minutes,” he says as if he hasn’t heard her.

She sighs and says nothing. It’s all too obvious how hard the Doctor is taking what he evidently sees as a failure, and she isn’t sure whether she can talk him out of it.

“Four,” he says a short time later.

“Doctor,” Donna pleads, although she knows there’s no point since he wont’ agree, but she can’t bear to sit here and listen to him count down the seconds, “we can’t change anything, so can’t we just leave?”

“Three minutes,” he replies.

Sighing again, Donna picks up twigs from the ground around them and feeds them into the fire. She shuts out the sound of the Doctor’s gloomy voice counting down the second-last and final minute before the major event that she knows will erupt on the other side of the high walls.

“Thirty seconds,” she hears him say at last. “Twenty. Ten.”

“Five,” she counts with him under her breath as the tension around them builds. “Three. Two. One.”

Although they’re expecting something, they both start violently at the sound of a loud bang from the other side of the walls. Donna frowns when that is followed by a high-pitched whistling sound and then an explosion of colour high in the sky above them.

“The signal,” the Doctor declares.

“No!” Donna sits upright to stare. “Fireworks!”

“Could still be the si…” The Doctor is silenced when coloured explosions continue to go off high above them. “Or possibly just fireworks,” he’s forced to admit.

Donna laughs in relief. “All that secrecy,” she declares in delight. “And it’s a party!”

“A surprise party,” the Doctor has to agrees as one of the fireworks spells out the words ‘Happy Birthday’ in blue and green light. “For the governor,” he adds, his voice revealing his growing comprehension, “which is why he didn’t know about it.”

She continues to chuckle as she admires the Catherine wheels that are spinning on the walls – and which they had previously thought was ammunition of some sort – while the Doctor fishes in the pocket of his jacket and pulls out a plastic bag.

“Marshmallow?” he suggests in an apologetic tone.

Donna grins and fishes two out of the bag, picking up a stick and poking them onto the end before she holds them over the fire.

“I think that’s a first,” she says while they toast.

“First what?” the Doctor asks as he imitates her actions.

She glances at him out of the corner of her eye as she eats her marshmallows, before she says, “The first time you’ve ever been so utterly and completely wrong.”

“Oi!” he’s beginning indignantly, when suddenly his marshmallows flare up and he has to pull them out of the fire and blow on them to extinguish them before they become inedible.

“And you know something else, Doctor?” she goes on as he crams both blackened marshmallows into his mouth and reaches into the bag for more.

“Mmm?” he asks, arching an eyebrow as he chews.

“Sometimes,” she says as he takes the new marshmallows he offers and begins cooking them, “it’s good to be wrong.”
Mood:: 'pessimistic' pessimistic
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posted by [identity profile] beautifulntime.livejournal.com at 06:07pm on 02/05/2010
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!

There are no words. Okay, a few, but none that do justice. ;)

Heh. I wanted to hug the poor Doctor, 'cause of course when he can't fix something he gets so upset, and then Donna figures out the fireworks and he's still pouting for about half a second. And then he just offers her a marshmallow. Oh goodness, then win! *grins, snuggles you*
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 08:59pm on 02/05/2010
Yay for you loving it!

He is a very frustrated person, and, as you say, sulking. But marshmallows make everything better.

May I share this with others?
 
posted by [identity profile] beautifulntime.livejournal.com at 09:03pm on 02/05/2010
Hehe. Of course I did! It was brilliant. I thought you'd gone all angst on me, and then it was fireworks and marshmallows and the Doctor looking like a silly bugger. Who wouldn't love that?

And marshmallows do in fact make everything better. Lol now I fancy some too. :p

No, never, not ever! *snorts* Riiiight, like I'd keep this from anyone. You know you can share anything with everybody! :D
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 09:08pm on 02/05/2010
Yay! And yes, I so like a dose of humour every now and then, and it's fun to make a bit of fun of the Doctor.

Thank you! It's your story, so you have the right to decide, but now everyone can see it. *g*
 
posted by [identity profile] beautifulntime.livejournal.com at 09:26pm on 02/05/2010
Listen, miss, just because all the other kids are doing it....

;)


Hehe. Well you know I like to share but I do of course appreciate you asking. I think everyone else will enjoy it too! *dances*
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 03:04am on 03/05/2010
*lol* They only do it because I'm doing it first!

And yes, people certainly seemed to enjoy it...
 
posted by [identity profile] time-converges.livejournal.com at 09:25pm on 02/05/2010
Yay for being wrong! I'm glad she didn't give him too much of a hard time, since she knew what he had gone through thinking they couldn't stop it. I love that he carries marshmallows with him, too. :D
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 03:03am on 03/05/2010
Yes, sometimes Donna is nice enough to give the Doctor a bit of slack. And marshmallows should always be carried! *lol*
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posted by [personal profile] juliet316 at 09:39pm on 02/05/2010
*snickers* Poor Ten, he's adorable when he's wrong and it turns out to be something innocent. Lovely as always.
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 03:07am on 03/05/2010
*lol* He is, isn't he? So passionate and driven and hating that he couldn't do anything - only to find that there was nothing he had to do!
 
posted by [identity profile] sal-de-bains.livejournal.com at 12:14am on 03/05/2010
Great prompt and a great story!!!! Lol x
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 03:15am on 03/05/2010
Thank you so much!
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posted by [personal profile] sykira at 12:29am on 03/05/2010
Awwww campfire buddies with marshmallows and fireworks! It's so lovely! And so inherently romantic :D even though I can see why you didn't go that way given your prompter!

I like him angsting too, so nice that for once it isn't all death and destruction :D
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 03:20am on 03/05/2010
Hee, so glad you liked it! And yes, a bit romantic, but considering who I was writing it for, I couldn't push it far in that direction.

I did think it was time that things weren't quite as dramatic as they usually are...
 
posted by [identity profile] ebony-steinbach.livejournal.com at 09:40am on 03/05/2010
I'm so glad that everything turned out alright in the end. It's such an "Everybody lives" moment, and the countdown with the Doctor and Donna was a nice touch.
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 10:32am on 03/05/2010
Yes, I do like occasions where that happens. So glad you enjoyed it!
 
posted by [identity profile] angel-b33.livejournal.com at 10:06pm on 20/05/2010
Cuteness! Love the image of them watching the fireworks and having toasted marshmallows. For some reason puts me in mind of that bit in Aladdin at the end of 'Whole new world' when they're watching fireworks
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 03:02am on 21/05/2010
Yes, I can certainly see how that scene would come to mind! And I thought they deserved a moment of peace and quiet...

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