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Title: When Wishes Come True – Always There For You
Author: [livejournal.com profile] katherine_b
Rating: G
Summary: Donna promised the Doctor ‘forever.’ Is it time for her to deliver on that promise?
Word Count: approx 950 words
Characters: Ten, Donna and the Genie
A/N: Written for [livejournal.com profile] sykira, who asked “Okay for SURE I want to see [Donna] "get used to the changes in this body" [in When Wishes Come True] preferably with the Doctor doing what he can to be there for her easing the transition :D But I also really want to see her wake up in his arms and him taking care of her afterward because I am huge sucker for that kind of H/C more than anything.”

Note: [livejournal.com profile] sonicgirl2005 has made me a pretty graphic for my story! Whee!

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The Genie stops chanting and the infirmary is suddenly and terrifyingly silent. The Doctor isn’t even daring to breathe in case it somehow upsets the delicate balance he can feel in the room.

And then a soft whimper breaks the silence and his eyes fly open as he looks down to see Donna’s face contorted in pain, although her eyes remain closed.

“Genie?” he questions desperately.

“She’s growing a new heart,” the Genie points out. “Not to mention that respiratory bypass system you’ve got. Did you expect that to be painless?”

“I didn’t expect her to feel it!” he snaps back, trying to get a grasp on her temples to rid her of the pain, but she twists out of his grasp as a particularly bad convulsion hits.

“She won’t remember it, if that’s any comfort,” comes the reply. “She’s still unconscious from what you did to her.”

“She’ll be in pain from all that thrashing around when she does wake up,” he exclaims in horror.

“At least she will wake up,” the Genie retorts coolly. “How much success were you having?”

That uncomfortable truth silences him, and all he can do is hold on to Donna as she twitches and moans. Still, his grasp on her means that he can feel the changes that are taking place inside her body and which will allow her to survive having a Time Lord’s consciousness in her head.

Beads of perspiration are standing out on his forehead and his hearts are racing with fear by the time Donna finally lies still again, her face once more as lax as it was when she collapsed unconscious into his arms. He lifts her gently into his hold, her head resting against his shoulder. After what just happened, he can’t bear not to have her as close to him as possible.

The Genie is hovering in the far corner, only just visible out of the corner of the Doctor’s eye, but the Doctor has no time for him now. His focus is on Donna, willing her to wake up, desperate for it to have worked.

When she finally stirs, her breath soft in his ear, he reaches down to cover her hands, which he has carefully placed on her stomach, with the fingers of his free hand.

He can gradually feel her regaining consciousness, but more importantly, he can feel her mind slowly opening inside his, the Time Lord parts of her linking with the same parts in him. It’s an astonishing sensation. He hasn’t felt anything like it since the loss of Gallifrey.

And then Donna’s fingers creep between his so that their hands are linked and he looks down to find her watching him.

“I don’t know how two hearts and that bloody heartbeat doesn’t drive you crazy,” she murmurs, and he grins, relief flooding through him.

She’s all right.

“You’ll get used to it,” he assures her, smoothing his thumb over her fingers. “I’ll show you how.”

“Yeah, that and everything else,” she tells him. “Especially how to block the flow of thoughts I can feel coming from you as clearly as if you were yelling at me.”

“Sorry.” He silences his own thoughts and sees her give a sight of relief before she smiles at him.

“Don’t feel so guilty, you prawn,” she says, giving his hand a reassuring squeeze. “You did what you had to do, didn’t you? I’m still alive – and you’re not about to dump me back in Chiswick!”

“Not a chance.” He gently helps her into a sitting position and then she fixes him with a look, lifting a hand to rest it on her chest between her original and new hearts.

“You didn’t do this on your own,” she says in a definite tone. “I mean, you’re good, but you’re not that good!”

He turns and gestures to the Genie, who is still sitting in the corner, twirling his empty lamp on one finger.

“He did it,” he says simply.

He expects Donna to acknowledge the Genie, but instead she turns back to stare at him, a look of utter astonishment on her face.

“Your third wish?” she says feebly. “You used it on me? Just to save me?”

“Not just anything,” he assures her, placing his hands on her shoulders so that she’s looking directly at him. “Everything. The most important thing. The most important woman in the Universe. You, Donna Noble.”

She stares at him, her eyes wide, and he can’t be surprised when they suddenly fill with tears. Crying might not be something a Time Lord typically does, but considering what she’s gone through today, knowing how close she's come to death, a few tears are definitely excusable.

He pulls her gently into his arms, feeling as she clings to him, her hands clawing at his back as she sobs. He rocks her, murmuring soothing words and the occasional term of endearment that he can’t hold in, until finally she pulls away and wipes her nose. He hands her a tissue from a box on a nearby table and then stands up.

“Just going to get you a drink,” he says when she looks at him plaintively, as if asking him not to leave. He sends her a reassuring thought as he adds, “Won’t be a sec.”

The kitchen is next-door to the infirmary and he gets out a glass, filling it from a bottle in the fridge, since he knows Donna prefers chilled water. He’s out of the room for all of a minute, but it’s long enough.

“So,” Donna says in would-be careless tones as he re-enters the room with her water, “exactly how long have you loved me then?”

The glass ends up on the floor.

Next Part
Mood:: 'exanimate' exanimate
There are 25 comments on this entry. (Reply.)
juliet316: Made for me by < lj user= alizarin-skies> as a result of bidding on her for the Support Stacie auction.  Not shareable (DoctorWho: Awwww)
posted by [personal profile] juliet316 at 10:32pm on 30/04/2010
Awwwwwwwww........ Lovely and sweet. LOL at the end with Donna figuring it out without him having to say anything.
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 10:45pm on 30/04/2010
Hee, thank you! And either Donna worked it out for herself or the Genie casually said something like "You know he loves you, right?"
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posted by [personal profile] juliet316 at 01:10am on 01/05/2010
*reserves thought for next Timestamp meme*
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 02:04am on 01/05/2010
*lol* I bet you will!
 
posted by [identity profile] shining-moment.livejournal.com at 10:44pm on 30/04/2010
So much love for this :)
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 10:45pm on 30/04/2010
Aw, thanks! So glad you do!
 
posted by [identity profile] time-converges.livejournal.com at 11:05pm on 30/04/2010
Ooooh, I love this! Naturally it would be a bit of an adjustment for Donna, so I'm glad the Doctor was there to comfort her - and worry for her. :) And the ending is perfect Donna!

But this line: "murmuring soothing words and the occasional term of endearment that he can’t hold in" I just love so much.

Brilliant addition to the original, as ever, my dear. ♥
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 02:01am on 01/05/2010
Hee, thank you. Yes, quite a lot of adjustment for Donna, but the Doctor would certainly help her all he could. And I'm sure he wouldn't be able to help telling her how he felt, even if he assumed she wouldn't hear him.
 
posted by [identity profile] luinel-anduril.livejournal.com at 12:15am on 01/05/2010
Crying might not be something a Time Lord typically does, but considering what she’s gone through today, knowing how close she's come to death, a few tears are definitely excusable.

Excuse me??? Seems like he was tearing up every other day. Her, too, for that matter. Not typical, my foot.

ETA: i wasn't expecting you to add to this, i like the extras. (:
Edited Date: 2010-05-01 12:24 am (UTC)
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 02:03am on 01/05/2010
You know, I can only think of two occasions when, as the Doctor, he really let himself go, and that was when the Master refused to regenerate and when he was talking to Wilf about Donna during the scene in my icon. There was one tear with Rose in Doomsday. He blubbed like a girl as the human John Smith. But when else did he really cry?

I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
 
posted by [identity profile] luinel-anduril.livejournal.com at 03:54am on 01/05/2010
Well, maybe not full out crying, but i always remember how, after disappearing from Bad Wolf Bay, a tear runs down the Doctor's cheek. He teared up and went glassy eyed a lot, possibly in Pompeii and Poison Sky, definitely in Doctor's Daughter, Forest of the Dead, Midnight, end of Stolen Earth, and Journey's End, and that's just series four. What is wonderful about the Doctor is that he continues to feel deeply, even after all he's been through. i am a sucker for a man who cries, who isn't afraid to do it, and David has done so in multiple roles.

But Donna cries all the time, just about in every episode.
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 04:39am on 01/05/2010
True, he certainly looks miserable well enough, but I was going for actual tears, which is quite rare. And yes, I like a man crying as well, just as long as they don't do it all the time!

As for Donna, being both a human and an emotional female (!) I think she's entitled to the odd bout of crying. ;-)
 
posted by [identity profile] louiecat68.livejournal.com at 02:21am on 01/05/2010
Great timestamp. I love the end with the glass on the floor.
I am in awe of the never ending stories that is coming out of your back garden. You are the queen.
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 03:17am on 01/05/2010
Thanks! Yes, my muse has been quite busy over the past few weeks. It's lovely when it all comes together! ;-)
 
posted by [identity profile] doctordonnafan.livejournal.com at 05:12am on 01/05/2010
awwww so cute!!!! i love how he was so gentle with her and the end cracked me up!!it was so donna!!! very awesome job with this :-)
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 05:46am on 01/05/2010
Hee, thank you! He is sweet with her, isn't he? And you know Donna never lets him get away with anything! ;-)
 
posted by [identity profile] ebony-steinbach.livejournal.com at 07:39am on 01/05/2010
I'm grinning like a mad loon at the last line, and half-want a fic for the scene immediately afterwards, where he's all speechless and deer-stuck-in-headlights. I've particularly loved this series and am so glad you added this bit to it.
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 07:48am on 01/05/2010
*lol* Yes, he would be absolutely petrified! And if you want to keep that until I put up a new timestamp meme (which should go up in the next week or so) then I'll add it to my list. ;-)
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posted by [personal profile] sykira at 05:38am on 07/05/2010
so seconded!
 
posted by [identity profile] vickysg1.livejournal.com at 10:01am on 01/05/2010
That was great!

And Genie just couldn't keep his mouth shut in the end, right?
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 10:02pm on 01/05/2010
Thanks! And no, he absolutely couldn't! Where would the fun be in that? ;-)
sykira: (Brilliant green)
posted by [personal profile] sykira at 05:37am on 07/05/2010

I hear through the grapevine you are making people cry with the newest, so I'm staying away for now, if I reach a psychologically stable place I will read it, maybe, but I can't handle sadness :/

::Focuses instead on something positive::

I love how Donna's Time Lady -ness brings back something of Gallifrey for the Doctor, I think it is easy to overlook what a huge thing that would be for the Doctor.

After what just happened, he can’t bear not to have her as close to him as possible. Awwww. i really like that her physiological changes don't happen effortlessly in this one, it seems more real that way. And I like the poor Doctor being all distraught because he can't bear to see her in pain, bless him.

I love how you have Donna wake up all bravado and snarkiness and then she just crumbles in tears in his arms for a bit and he takes such good care of her.
(one tiny typo though, I think you meant *She* sobs here: "her hands clawing at his back as he sobs.")

And the end with her would-be careless tones, it's epic! So so Donna! LOL
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 10:04pm on 07/05/2010
Oi, but hold on! That was the story you asked me to write! 0_0 And you might find it's not as bad as you thought...

I can't even begin to imagine how massive it would be for him to have one of his own people back. I suppose we see that in the way he greets the return of the Master, but for it to happen in someone he loves, like Donna, would be absolutely incredible.

I've usually written the change as something painless or almost so, like at the Doctor and Donna's wedding in Finding A Way Home, but I do agree it would be far more realistic for it to hurt. It's also got to have a major impact on Donna, who, apart from anything else, is expecting to wake up to a life she hates and doesn't want to go back to. Instead she ends up with the man she loves in the place she loves. Definitely reason to cry.

Yes, Donna's really good at doing that to people, esp. the Doctor...

(Oh, and thanks for the typo notification. Fixed!)
Edited Date: 2010-05-07 10:06 pm (UTC)
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posted by [personal profile] sykira at 11:16pm on 07/05/2010
The story you asked me to write?! PFFFFT if you have gone and done in poor Handy there ain't no way I'm taking responsibility for that one, I'd be lynched!

Anyway my sources tell me the story previously considered emotionally hazardous is now much safer territory and not to be missed so I'll be checking it out once I stop writing my own shameless OT3 mindsex story. My Handy IS an alpha male, all the way :D :D
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 11:19pm on 07/05/2010
*lol* And I came so close to including you in my author's notes, just to divert the slings and arrows!

And you have very fast sources, so I look forward to your comments. I look forward to your Handy-as-alpha male story!

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