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posted by [personal profile] katherine_b at 10:39am on 11/04/2010 under , ,
Title: Warming To The Idea
Author: [livejournal.com profile] katherine_b
Rating: G
Summary: There’s a pattern through the adventures of the Doctor and Donna…
Word Count: 1,000 words
Characters: Ten and Donna
A/N: Written for [livejournal.com profile] wiggiemomsi, who bid on me for the Support Stacie Auction. Her prompt was ‘ice’ and she requested a hurt/comfort fic with Ten and Donna. Wiggie, this may not quite have had in mind, but I hope you like it…

“Oh and you'd better put this on,” the Doctor tells Donna, reaching for her hand.

“Oh, d’you have to rub it in?” she complains, and only then does he remember the human habit of wearing wedding bands on that finger.

“No engagement ring?” he asks somewhat thoughtlessly as he slides on the plain gold band of the biodamper.

“Lance hadn’t found the right one,” she says defensively. “He said he wanted to find the piece of ice that would be just right for me.”

“Ice?”

“Diamonds!” Donna rolls her eyes. “Bling, you know!”

“Strange,” he muses.

“Romantic!” she snaps back.

* * *

They skid to a halt when confronted by the head of Adipose and two guards with semi-automatic weapons.

“Well then,” Miss Foster says coldly as she removes her glasses, “at last.”

“Hello,” Donna says.

“Nice to meet you,” the man beside her puts in. “I'm the Doctor.”

“And I'm Donna,” that woman adds. “Nice reception you give people here.”

“We do our best to be polite,” Miss Forster assures them.

“Actually, I’d call it chilly,” Donna offers, glancing at the men holding the guns.

“Positively icy,” the Doctor corrects as they exchange glances.

“Partners in crime,” the other woman sneers.

* * *

She doesn’t notice the burns from their adventures beneath Pompeii until the Doctor takes her into the kitchen.

“Why is it green?” Donna demands as the Doctor applies what looks like an ice pack to her red, throbbing palms.

“It’s not normal, human ice,” he says. “It’s something long and complicated, which you’d ask me to repeat several times if I actually told you.”

“In other words,” Donna corrects him, relieved that the burning sensation is easing, “you can’t be bothered making something up.”

“No!” he protests, and then catches her eye and looks sheepish. “Well, maybe just a bit.”

* * *

She steps outside, her feet crunching on something soft, her hands clutching her upper arms in self-preservation.

“I’ve got the word,” she declares. “Freezing!”

The Doctor follows her outside, and she can almost feel the glee he’s exuding. “Snow!” he announces in delight. “Aw, real snow! Proper snow at last! That’s more like it, lovely. What do you think?”

What does she think? What does she think?! She thinks that where there’s snow, there’s ice, and where there’s ice, there’s her on her bum in an undignified manner, her legs and arms going every which way. That’s what she thinks!

* * *

“Didn't take you long to replace me then,” Martha says as Donna appears.

The Doctor jumps in before Donna can speak, and she hears the discomfort in his voice.

“Now, don't start fighting,” he pleads. “Martha, Donna. Donna, Martha. Please don't fight, can't bear fighting.”

She wonders what’s happened to prompt this reaction from him, but perhaps she should just be thankful that he didn’t drop her off somewhere before he came here.

“You wish,” Donna mocks, and then steps forward to shake Martha’s hand, smiling as warmly as she can to break the ice. “I've heard all about you.”

* * *

“You belong here, with them,” the Doctor growls, and Donna glares at him.

“She belongs with us,” she argues vociferously. “With you. She's your daughter!”

Clearly that argument cuts no ice with him. “She's a soldier,” he snarls. “She came out of that machine!”

“Oh yes, I know that bit!” she retorts, wishing she could grab him and shake some sense into him. “Listen, have you got that stethoscope?” He hesitates, clearly startled by her request. She holds out a hand impatiently. “Give it to me. Come on!”

“What're you doing?” Jenny asks anxiously.

“It’s all right,” Donna reassures her.

* * *

“But one must be sure with the Unicorn on the loose.”

“A unicorn?” the Doctor says gleefully, exchanging delighted glances with Donna. “Brilliant! Where?”

The Unicorn,” Lady Eddison corrects him. “The jewel thief. And nobody knows who he is. He's just struck again. Snatched Lady Babbington's pearls right from under her nose,” she goes on as the footman presents their drinks.

“A funny place to wear pearls,” Donna suggests softly as she takes her glass off the tray.

The ice in the Doctor’s glass clinks gently as he nods in agreement and raises his lime and soda to his lips.

* * *

“You don't have a suit,” she points out, “so you're in just as much danger as I am and I'm not leaving!”

Somehow she knows what he’s going to do. She’s not taken in by his reply of “Donna! Let me explain.”

The world around her dissolves and she feels a deep sense of betrayal that he would try to get rid of her like that, even under the guise of saving her.

When she finds him again, he’s going to be on such thin ice with her that he’ll need to grovel for a week!

And then she forgets.

* * *

“This is insane!” Donna declares as she glances out of the window at massive blocks of what looks like ice.

“That’s stone,” the Doctor says, waving his free hand, his other hand clutching her fingers as she wobbles. “This,” he gestures to the rink around them, “is ice.”

“I am aware of that,” she says bitterly. “Why did I want to come here again?”

He grins. “To relax,” he replies.

“And am I relaxing?” she demands, before her feet slide out from under her and she lands on her back.

The Doctor arches an eyebrow. “Looks pretty relaxed to me!”

* * *

The Doctor stares at her. “You don’t want to go shopping?” he demands. “Seriously?”

“Nope.” She shrugs, smoothing her fingers over the console.

“Donna,” his voice is serious, questioning, curious, “why?”

“It’s just,” she looks up at him, speaking faster as the words flow “I can shop anywhere, you know. Even if it’s an alien market. But all those other places you could take me – I can’t do that with anyone else.”

A grin works its way across his face and his hand finds the gears. “All right!” he says in obvious delight. “That idea's on ice then. Allons-y!”
There are 31 comments on this entry. (Reply.)
 
posted by [identity profile] wiggiemomsi.livejournal.com at 01:19am on 11/04/2010
Awww, Katherine, I really love what you've done! Favorite lines:

“It’s just,” she looks up at him, speaking faster as the words flow “I can shop anywhere, you know. Even if it’s an alien market. But all those other places you could take me – I can’t do that with anyone else.”

I really, really like how you took my thread bear prompt and fleshed it out into such sweet little "slices of life" with Ten/Donna!

*Happy Hugs*
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 01:21am on 11/04/2010
Yay! So glad you liked it! May I share with others?
 
posted by [identity profile] wiggiemomsi.livejournal.com at 02:33am on 11/04/2010
Oh, please do; I want everyone in the Whoniverse to read whatever is written for me.

*Hugs*
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 02:48am on 11/04/2010
Thank you so much, I shall!
 
posted by [identity profile] time-converges.livejournal.com at 03:14am on 11/04/2010
Ooh, I love what you did with that, weaving the theme throughout. And of course, the neat fix at the end. :)
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 03:19am on 11/04/2010
Hee, thank you! Do you know how hard it is to do a fix-it in 100 words? *lol*
 
posted by [identity profile] time-converges.livejournal.com at 03:20am on 11/04/2010
That's what makes it really impressive! *lol*
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posted by [personal profile] juliet316 at 03:27am on 11/04/2010
Lovely slice of life piece with the subtle fix - it at the end.
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 03:51am on 11/04/2010
Thank you!
 
posted by [identity profile] loves-glamour.livejournal.com at 03:41am on 11/04/2010
Oh my..I never realized how many meanings the word 'ice' had. This is fascinating. The story itself is lovely :)
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 03:52am on 11/04/2010
*lol* Thank you! Always fun to add a bit of something to a fic! ;-)
 
posted by [identity profile] angel-b33.livejournal.com at 04:44am on 11/04/2010
Lovely! You might just be my favourite LJ author! All the different ways you used the word ice made me think of that myth about the Eskimo having however many words for snow
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 07:01am on 11/04/2010
Thank you so much! It's fun to see how many different ways a basic idea can be played with.
 
posted by [identity profile] pickledminx.livejournal.com at 08:06am on 11/04/2010
Hee! Aww, this is lovely :)
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 10:41am on 11/04/2010
Very glad you like it!
 
posted by [identity profile] ebony-steinbach.livejournal.com at 10:00am on 11/04/2010
You surprised me again (in a good way this time)! I almost stopped reading because I thought you'd include Journey's End, but I'm so glad I kept reading : ) Loved how you weaved in "ice" into each scene, and I especially love the Pompeii one. Donna's got the Doctor's number alright, and I bet he loves it!
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 10:42am on 11/04/2010
*lol* You know, sometimes I don't go to nasty places in my fic! ;-) And yes, Donna absolutely knows the Doctor, inside and out!
 
posted by [identity profile] shining-moment.livejournal.com at 10:31am on 11/04/2010
Yes indeed, run away from Shan Shen, run away!
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 10:42am on 11/04/2010
*g* Absolutely!
 
posted by [identity profile] vickysg1.livejournal.com at 11:29am on 11/04/2010
That was awesome! And yeah for Donna not wanting to go shopping! She should have said no, really!
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 11:43am on 11/04/2010
Thank you so much! And yes, it would have been much nicer and easier if she hadn't!
 
posted by [identity profile] luinel-anduril.livejournal.com at 03:43pm on 11/04/2010
i'm going through Doctor/Donna withdrawals, as there's not much fanfic coming out and my aunt has my series four. Thanks for this! i just want to forget about Eleven and Amy right now.
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 08:47pm on 11/04/2010
After realising that I'm not desperate to download episodes and am happy to wait a couple of weeks for it to air on Aussie TV, I'm obviously feeling a similar way. Don't worry, I have quite a lot of Doctor/Donna to come...
 
posted by [identity profile] lemon-pencil.livejournal.com at 10:01pm on 11/04/2010
Ooh, I like what you've done with the prompt here, turning into a theme across a series of little fics :) Are they all 100 words?
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 10:02pm on 11/04/2010
They are! I'm rather proud, considering how hard I find it to write proper drabbles... And thanks!
 
posted by [identity profile] lemon-pencil.livejournal.com at 10:04pm on 11/04/2010
Quick!reply is quick :) I hadn't even moved off the page yet! Wow, that's quite impressive; proper drabbles are hard :/
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 10:09pm on 11/04/2010
*lol* My email decides to alert me to your reply immediately, rather than waiting like it usually does. And thanks, yes, I absolutely agree!
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posted by [personal profile] sykira at 09:58am on 12/04/2010
amazing! You never cease to surprise me. This is magnificent. I love the flow and the structure, it is such a feat how these bits are both self-contained and yet interwoven around the prompt word, I love you keep challenging and surpassing yourself as a writer. You inspire me.
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 11:23am on 12/04/2010
Thank you so much! Yes, I enjoyed working on these because it gave me a chance to build on my limited drabble-writing abilities. And thank you so much, I'm delighted to be able to inspire people!
 
posted by [identity profile] kwiknkleen.livejournal.com at 04:24am on 24/04/2010
Thanks for all the little glimpses into their life. What a wonderful piece of work.
And my favorite line is the same as wiggiemomsi-

“It’s just,” she looks up at him, speaking faster as the words flow “I can shop anywhere, you know. Even if it’s an alien market. But all those other places you could take me – I can’t do that with anyone else.”

Of course anything that keeps them away from *there* is great.
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 05:50am on 24/04/2010
Thank you! And wouldn't it be lovely if it was so easy to subvert what happened?

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