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Title: The Skies Turn Dark 1/7
Author: [livejournal.com profile] katherine_b
Rating: PG
Characters: The Doctor (Ten), Jack Harkness, Martha Jones, (eventually) Donna Noble
Summary: The Doctor needs help.
Spoilers: It helps if you’ve seen up to the end of Journey’s End. Also spoiler for the major character-related event of Torchwood’s Children of Earth as well as the general plot, i.e. alien threat. Please note, however, that I do not watch Torchwood, so this is basically Captain Jack as we see him in Doctor Who, but who has gone through the events of CoE.
A/N: Ah yes, finally a completely new fic from me! Not a timestamp meme story or a continuation of any something. Completely and utterly new. So you have no idea what’s going to happen. Bwahahahaha…
A/N 2: Virtual cookies for the first people who can pinpoint the source of my title.

Part I

“What's this about, Jack?”

Martha's confusion is obvious as Jack all but drags her into the building that used to house Torchwood One.

“Hurry up,” is all he says as he grabs her hand and rushes her down the hall. “Quick!”

“I don't appear to be able to do anything else,” she retorts, finally breaking in to a run to keep up with his long strides. “Tell me what's going on, Jack!”

“He needs you,” Jack tells her, stopping short in front of a door and pushing it open, stepping away so that Martha can see into the room.

The room would usually contain two hospital-style beds, but now there is only one, standing in the middle of the room, surrounded by small, wheeled tables and chairs. A variety of screens hang around the walls. Numerous other machine are fastened to hooks or hanging from IV poles around the walls. The whole place is reminiscent of a futuristic hospital room.

However the room isn't free of life.

“Doctor!” Martha exclaims in horror, dashing to the occupied bed.

The Doctor is lying on the cot, his eyes partly open, but clearly not focusing on anything as they travel erratically around the room. His lips are moving, nonsensical syllables creating an undercurrent of noise in the room, and his hair is plastered to his white face. Occasionally his legs or his arms twitch as if he’s trying to move them, but the actions are so feeble that they are almost unnoticeable. He is clad only in a white shirt, brown pants and red converse. His tie, jacket and duster have been draped over a nearby chair.

Martha places her hands on both sides of his chest, checking his hearts, before looking up at Jack. That man has stepped into the room and stops just inside the door, leaning against the wall. “Where did you find him?”

“A long way away.” Jack sighs and walks to the bedside. “Beside the TARDIS. He was unconscious and freezing, but he started to babble like that after I got him a little warmer.”

“What's he saying?” Martha demands.

“No idea.” Jack shakes his head. “I presume it's Gallifreyan.”

“Why can't we understand him?” she asks as she hauls some of the machinery closer to the bed and starts attaching varies wires to the Doctor's arms and hands, reaching up to switch on several of the monitors. “Why isn't the TARDIS translating for us?”

“The TARDIS is dead,” Jack says softly. “No light, no sound, nothing. And I think that's the reason we can't understand him now – because the TARDIS isn't alive if it doesn't have a connection to the Doctor. And he's clearly too ill for that.”

He stares down at the man he carried into this room only an hour previously. The solitary difference between the Doctor Jack rescued from an otherwise deserted planet and the man on the bed in front of him is that Jack has gently cleaned the grime off the other man's face while he waited for Martha to arrive. However that has uncovered the Time Lord's ashen complexion, which makes the freckles and the eyebrows and lashes stand out so sharply against his almost grey skin.

As he watches Martha work, Jack thinks back to when he cradled the unconscious Doctor in his arms in the dark, dead TARDIS, blankets wrapped around the man's motionless figure in an attempt to warm him after his prolonged period of lying in the snow before they risked the journey through the vortex.

He doubts he will ever forget the shock he got when the man suddenly began to speak meaningless syllables at about half of the rapid rate at which he usually talked. He can still remember the weight of the Doctor's limp, heavy body pressed against his during their flash through the vortex, and the way he fell to the ground, the Doctor collapsed on top of him, when they finally arrived in the lobby of Torchwood One.

“How did you get him here?” Martha wants to know, glancing at the monitor showing lines rising and falling, presumably, Jack guesses, at the same rate as the Doctor's hearts.

Pulling up the sleeve of his jacket, Jack taps the vortex manipulator in demonstration. “That'll teach him to defuse it,” he says with an attempt at humour.

For several minutes, he silently watches Martha working on the Doctor, who is still only semi-conscious, muttering incomprehensible words and occasionally gasping for breath. Jack is startled in one occasion to see tears glistening in his eyes as Martha draws a vial of blood, and even more surprised when, the next instant and for only a split second, a sudden grin illuminates the Doctor’s gaunt, fragile features.

Martha makes use of a variety of medical instruments she finds around the room to run a series of tests, taking note of the results on a pad of paper she finds on one of the shelves. Finally, she drapes a blanket over the Doctor, gently lifting his arms to lay them on top of the covers so that she can still reach the numerous instruments attached to him, and then turns to Jack, who speaks before she can.

“What is it?”

“I don't know,” she admits with obvious reluctance. “None of the tests have given me a positive result. All I know is that his hearts are racing and they're becoming erratic. He could be running a temperature, but I don't know what's normal for a Time Lord, so I can't be not sure.”

Jack folds his arms over his chest, gazing at the Doctor's slack, almost emotionless face, the only movement coming from his lips, which haven’t ceased since he began mumbling in apparent delirium.

“So he regenerates,” he says with a shrug. “We should be thankful there isn't an alien invasion happening at the same time. Probably the least stressful change he's ever gone through.”

“And if he can't?” Martha asks softly as she checks the strength of the Doctor's pulse, deliberately not looking at Jack.

That man stares at her in confusion, suddenly aware of a flash of what he hopes is irrational fear.

“Why wouldn't he?” he shoots back, attempting to conceal his concern.

“Jack, the Master chose not to regenerate after he was shot,” Martha reminds him gently. “That suggests to me that regeneration is a conscious decision. And I don't think,” she adds, stroking the Doctor's hair, “that he's capable of making that choice.”

Jack feels as if something has dropped within him and he stares at her in speechless horror.

“But... he has to,” he protests feebly. “He can't... I mean, not now!” He feels his eyes burning with sudden tears. “Not so soon after...”

“After what?” Martha asks him.

He shakes his head, unable rather than unwilling to answer, but with his mind filled with the agonising memory of Ianto's last moments. The thought of losing the Doctor so soon after that other terrible loss is almost incomprehensible, and he leans breathlessly against the nearby wall to hold himself up as he stifles a sob.

* * *
Teaser for next part:

‘Is he getting worse?’
Mood:: 'groggy' groggy
There are 73 comments on this entry. (Reply.)
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posted by [personal profile] juliet316 at 09:43pm on 05/09/2009
*sniffles* Poor everybody.

But I'm also worried because you didn't specify which Doctor in the character pairings. There's not going to be an 'R' word is there?
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 09:51pm on 05/09/2009
Oops, sorry about that! Fixed now. It's Ten.

*offers tissues*
 
posted by [identity profile] time-converges.livejournal.com at 10:30pm on 05/09/2009
Oh, I love this. Poor Doctor, so ill or injured, and poor Martha and Jack not knowing what is wrong with him. And poor Jack, worrying about losing someone else so soon. :(

I'm sure there's plenty of angst on the way, but I still can't wait to see what's next.

Oh, and the title: Kate Bush? "We may live on in comets and stars?"
 
posted by [identity profile] shining-moment.livejournal.com at 10:58pm on 05/09/2009
Oh, you are spoiling us with all this fic and I am more than a little envious of all the plotbunnies you get assaulted by.

Poor Doctor and poor Jack, realising that regeneration may not be inevitable...I'm assuming our awesome Ms Noble holds the key to his survival. I await impatiently :)
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 11:09pm on 05/09/2009
*lol* Personally, I wish they'd give me a break, but never mind...

And we shall have to see just what, if anything, Donna can do.
 
posted by [identity profile] lemon-pencil.livejournal.com at 11:03pm on 05/09/2009
New fic! SQUEE!! You have my curiosity aroused. And darn it I'm away Monday to Friday so I'll miss most of it! Will have to catch up on it when I get back.
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 11:10pm on 05/09/2009
Ah, but think how nice will be for you to avoid all of the forthcoming cliffs...
 
posted by [identity profile] drakochi.livejournal.com at 11:19pm on 05/09/2009
Children of Earth? What Children of Earth? In my personal canon it never happened. Ianto just decided to be a companion of the 12th Doctor. *winks*

COE aside, this is an interesting story and I wonder what the Doctor has and how Donna will be able to save him is involved. Oh, I also suspect that you do have some sort of weakness for sick!Doctor where he is all vulnerable and all that jazz.

Hm, I guess in your fic Martha doesn't know what happened to Jack's team? Or she doesn't want to pry? Or is it irrelevant from now on?
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 11:21pm on 05/09/2009
*lol* Yup, I can deal with that. But I need him to be gone for this story so that Jack is a bit pathetic.

*thinks back over fic* I do have a bit of a weakness for sick!Doctor, don't I? I suppose because it's a convenient method of getting him out of the way so other characters can step up and do their thing.

As for your last comment, it's actually all three.
 
posted by [identity profile] drakochi.livejournal.com at 11:42pm on 05/09/2009
Jack was pathetic in COE anyways *is bitter* You are lucky that you are not watching TW.

I wonder if there is other ways to put him out of commission... *channels Jack*

Oh! Didn't River Song said about the skies will go dark if the Doctor accepts the fact that everybody dies or him himself is dieing. Can't remember the exact wording.
 
posted by [identity profile] goodbye2pisces.livejournal.com at 01:54am on 06/09/2009
Oh noes! The TARDIS dead?? Say it ain't so. And what could be wrong with the Doctor? I'm intrigued Kat. Can't wait for the next part :D
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 02:11am on 06/09/2009
Ah, that is the question! You'll have to wait and see... ;-)
 
posted by [identity profile] pacejunkie.livejournal.com at 02:47am on 06/09/2009
Ooh this is a great start. I love me some hurt Doctor. More soon please.
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 03:39am on 06/09/2009
So glad you like it! Hurt!Doctor is always nice, and I promise there will be more tomorrow.
 
posted by [identity profile] grlgoddess.livejournal.com at 07:05am on 06/09/2009
Bah! *is worried*
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 07:20am on 06/09/2009
Aw! *hugs you* *refuses to admit that worry may be justified*
 
posted by [identity profile] cnd83.livejournal.com at 12:36pm on 06/09/2009
Ohhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *is worried*

What if refuses to regenerate? He lost everything, his planet, his Donna, his Tardis, why would he want to live? *is very very worried now*

 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 08:54pm on 06/09/2009
Yes, after losing so much, one does have to wonder if he would feel he's got anything left to live for.

*is aware that that really isn't helping*

*grins evilly*
 
posted by [identity profile] sonicgirl2005.livejournal.com at 07:29pm on 06/09/2009
Ooooh, dear....evil!Katherine is going to be evil, isn't she?

*worries for the Doctor, Martha, the TARDIS, and eventually Donna. doesn't care about Jack, 'cause he's a slut!boy and I don't like him that much anyway*

First of all, if anyone asks, I did not pitch a little fit (read, I pitched a big one) when I saw that the TARDIS was dead. Surely she can't be really dead, can she? CAN SHE?!?!

*composes herself*

In other news, good ol' Martha, there to take care of him. That's why we like her, ya see. Well, love her, really, but who's counting? And the 'what if he forgets to regenerate' question freaked me out like a lot. Meep!

On the plus side, I was busy (read, I fell asleep as soon as I got home) last evening so I've just read this. That means only a few hours until the next bit! Yay!

*hopes appropriate!icon isn't appropriate*
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 08:57pm on 06/09/2009
Going to be? I am evil, dammit! *vvvvveg*

Is the TARDIS dead? Well, as we know from Turn Left, when the Doctor dies, so does the TARDIS. So it's possible...

Yes, Martha is the best person to have there, as Jack well knew, which is why he went to get her. She's going to be a very busy girl during this series.

More very soon (like now actually).

And I'd keep that icon handy if I were you.

That is all.
 
posted by [identity profile] cytherea999.livejournal.com at 06:02am on 13/09/2009
I should be worried about the Doctor, and everything, but... Dead TARDIS??? ::wibble::
 
posted by [identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com at 06:29am on 13/09/2009
Aww, I know! *pets you*

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