(That of course means that this was very good. Obviously.)
I love that they're so mate-y and hang out and that, no people, her brain hasn't exploded just from seeing him, although that's possible I suppose. Anyway, they're fantastic together, and even more so in this fic! But oh noes, Donna's getting snoopy, and she's made the poor Doctor mad. I'm surprised he didn't accidentally let something slip, bless his overactive mouth. Lol.
Anyway, was that a long enough comment? :p
In short, I love this. You know I'll be on tomorrow to get the next bit~! :D
Yes, they've had a wonderful relationship, all friendly and sweet.
And then Donna had to go and ruin it, didn't she?
I imagine the Doctor was thinking about every single word before it came out of his mouth so that he didn't say the wrong thing. I'm considering writing one scene from John Smith's POV, just to get an idea of what he's thinking, as a deleted scene. This is a pretty strong candidate for that scene.
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(That of course means that this was very good. Obviously.)
I love that they're so mate-y and hang out and that, no people, her brain hasn't exploded just from seeing him, although that's possible I suppose. Anyway, they're fantastic together, and even more so in this fic! But oh noes, Donna's getting snoopy, and she's made the poor Doctor mad. I'm surprised he didn't accidentally let something slip, bless his overactive mouth. Lol.
Anyway, was that a long enough comment? :p
In short, I love this. You know I'll be on tomorrow to get the next bit~! :D
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And then Donna had to go and ruin it, didn't she?
I imagine the Doctor was thinking about every single word before it came out of his mouth so that he didn't say the wrong thing. I'm considering writing one scene from John Smith's POV, just to get an idea of what he's thinking, as a deleted scene. This is a pretty strong candidate for that scene.
That was a lovely comment, thank you!
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(Well, not now, but you know what I mean. Actually I do mean now lol.)
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